A long time ago, a demon with nine tails suddenly appeared. Its tails lashed out, smashing mountains and sending tidal waves crashing to the shores. The ninjas rose up to defend there villagers. One ninja said “hold the attack and wait for the fourth hokage” while another ninja said “he’s getting closer”, “don’t let him near the village”. The sound of erupting earth coming from the beast’s footsteps, sent chills up the men’s spines. In the end there was only one shinobi who was brave enough to face the nine tail fox in mortal combat. He sacrificed his life to capture the beast and sealed it in a human body. This ninja was known as the fourth hokage.
Several years later…A young boy named Naruto with the Nine Tailed Fox sealed within him at birth, was frowned upon by the other villagers. The villagers just turned there backs on Naruto whenever he needed help, while saying “you don’t belong here”, “you’re a monster”. Naruto would just sit on the swing everyday by himself, all alone, with no friends. While on the swing he would just stare into nothingness, asking himself “why…,” “why me!!!,” “I haven’t done anything wrong." After a few hours had past he just stared at the ground while swinging, scuffing his shoes in the dirt. Suddenly, an idea poped into his head, his eyes widden, his heart started to race. He then clenched his frist and said "I'm Naruto Uzumaki," "I will become Hokage," " and when i do," "everybody in the village will respect me". When naruto look up a man stood in front of him, Naruto said "where did you come from Iruka sensee?" "what are you doing here?" Iruka sensei replied "what am i doing here?," " what are you doing here Naruto?," " You should be in class!!!"

The next morning in class Iruka sensei says “I’m at the end of my rope naruto,” “you failed the graduation test last time and the time before that.” “Tomorrow you’ve got another chance and you are missing up again.” Naruto just turns head to the right and says “whatever.” Iruka sensei points his hand to the rest of the class and says “FINE NARUTO!!!, since you missed class yesterday, everybody will review the transformation jitsu.” “ohhh-man” the class replied. So, the class started to present there tranformation jitsu in front of Iruka sensei, and ofcourse, it was now naruto's turn. His heart is pounding, his hands are sweating, and then suddenly he transformed into a copy of a naked beautiful woman. Iruka sensei was shocked. Naruto laught and said "thats my sexy jitsu" Iruka sensei shouted and said "CUT OUT YOUR STUPID TRICKS NARUTO," "THIS IS YOUR LAST WARNING!!!"
The next morning in class, Iruka sensei said "alright, for the test today we will be doing the transformation jitsu." Naruto's heart sank, he then srewed his face and said "No, thats my worsed jitsu." Iruka sensei said "alright Naruto you're first." Naruto slowly stood up, his heart felt like it was going to explode. He then walked up to the front of the class and said to himself "alright Naruto," "you can do this."Suddenly, the unspeakable happened. He produced a clone of himself, however, it wasn't any ordinary clone, it was, just a doll of himself lying on the ground. Iruka sensei was unimpressed. Sadly, Naruto knew then he was not going to pass his graduation test. Iruka sensei's head just sank down and he said "I'm sorry naruto," "I cannot let you pass."

The following day, everybody is graduating except for naruto. He was just sitting on the same familiar swing, asking himself "why" over and over again. His heart sank. He felt like life wasn't worth living. While on the swing he keep thinking about the other students who had graduated. He could'nt understand why the other students didn't care about him. Slowly, as time past he started become more and more angry. Naruto then got off the swing and walked into town. While walking he could hear the sound of people talking and the smell of ramen. By this time it was getting late and he was hungry.So, he decided to walk towards the ramen shop to get something to eat.
Suddenly, the village alarm went off. Everybody started running to their houses and closing their doors. Naruto said "what the hell's happening," "where is everybody going" a fellow shinobi replied "we are under attack," "It's the akatsuki." Naruto knew this meant bad news. The akatsuki are known to be evil powerful ninjas, who will stop at nothing untill they get what they want. The shinobi closed the village gate, but it was to late, the akastuki were already inside. They only have one target and that's naruto....
Great start to your fan fiction. Is the fan fiction going to take a different turn from the actual story? Looking forward to seeing more.
ReplyDeleteAn eye-catching openning passage. It tells the background of the story, very well planned. In your story, you have touched a well-known imaginary figure in east aisa. An evil fox with nine tails, its full of dark magic and ambition.
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Cool - we've started from the initial story. I'd also like to know: Are you looking to continue from a point in the existing story, or create a side-story/mission for Naruto to do?
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ReplyDeleteI know the backgroud of the story is similar, however, I'm about to create a side mission where naruto has to protect his village by unleashing the devastating force of the nine tail fox. This will happen straight after he fails his test. The main guestion will be, which path will naruto choose, darkness or the light, good or evil, the choose in which all hearts have to bear.
Hey guys,
ReplyDeleteanother reason why i had to put the background of the story, is for people who have not watched naruto before. If i did not put the background the people wouldn't understand the story.
Thanks for the feedback.
Good fanfiction Chris. that's good you give the background of story.coz m not really fimilar with nauruto.That's really interesting. I will wait for second part.
ReplyDeleteBut I found some spelling mistakes like last paragraph spelling of woman and replied are wrong.Please check this out
I like Naruto- and this story is as interesting as the original!
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