Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Naruto Fanfic


Hey guys,

This is my favorite anime “Naruto.” Naruto Uzumaki is a young boy who has the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox sealed within him. Serval years before the start of the series, the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox attacked the Leaf Village. In response, the Fourth Hokage (The most powerful ninja in the village.) sacrificed his life to seal the demon inside Naruto when he was just a baby.

Academy Days

This about Naruto’s life. It starts off, when he is an orphan till he becomes the leader of the village. Great story about hate and betrayal.

This another great adventure about friendship. It’s about bringing Sasuke back and finding the Secret Uchiha. I won’t spoil the rest.

This story says it in the title. It’s alright, however, it got boring after the first paragraph. This is good story show me “what not to do” when writing my fanfic.

The Shadow

This is about a ninja Haruko Uzamaki , who is dead from the start. He goes to heaven; however, heaven is not what he thinks it is. It’s about different districts at war.

This about Naruto and the Uchiha brothers getting hit on by girls. Not that great, probably stupid.


This is about Sasuke asking who are the hokages (past leaders of village) in his class. However, when its gets to the start of fight scene the story is over. Thats stupid! The writer could've aleast finish the fight scene and then end the story. I hate cliff hangers.


Sakura is having nightmares. I don't like the storyline. However, this is good because it shows how to make your characters talk e.g. "with quotation marks" so, thats 1 interesting feature i will include in my naruto fanfic.
This story about naruto getting ready to pass his chunin exam (Ninja exams). Overall alright story, it gets a little bit boring as it is way to long.

4 comments:

  1. Com on guys comment on these fanfics

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  2. Nice naruto's mean.
    What sort of direction you going to go in with your fanfic?
    Check mine out on group 4's blog.
    Doing a Death Note and Saw cross-over.
    Check it out.

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  3. Thanks for comment Chris. I will try to make Rose happy and self confident in middle of story. But that's good suggestion, not make rose cried in whole fanfiction

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  4. Hi Chris, I published the improved version of Titanic fanfiction. In this Rose only cried for one time. haha....

    I am not fimilar with naruto. But that's good you publish the video. i will watch it so that it will be easy for me to understand your fanfic.

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